Filming plan and improvements for second draft.

• Establish ‘father’ character better, develop stronger costumes so the audience can relate and understand that Ochuko is the father easily
• Re-film phone/love/failed scene. Don’t make it so obvious work more with connotations and props.
• Longer mirror shots of the main character
• Zoom in, into the face shown in the reflection then cut to a full face shot looking in the camera acting as the mirror. Making the editing seamless and easier on the eyes.
• Have longer shots of the main character alone.
• Change credits, show throughout the opening sequence
• Change editing techniques, instead of a white flash, film a thinking shot, then go into a flash back.